I saw her on Facebook, sent her a friend’s request
She added me, and then we also met on Twitter
For sometime it seemed that we’d remain unmet
For she had Gchat, I felt Yahoo was much better
Once where a poke or a LOL would suffice
She wanted us to meet, it caught me by surprise
I am fat and balding, my profile pic was photoshopped
She was comely, and witty, I felt my stomach drop
Reluctantly after a few weeks I have had to agree
My love story I think is coming to an end
We meet today, This is my poetic lament
For who would love a man so bald and chunky
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The girl’s reply
Do not think that I am dumb or entirely lacking wit
As soon as you said you worked on the internet
I knew you were shy, had glasses and were fat
I had to break the ice, make moves, its a fact
I want a man with whom I can be comfortable and free
Not another male hunk who ogles at girls who are chesty
You techys will drool over gizmos and talk greek
And wont fuss if dinner is simple sandwich and coffee
If you like we can talk on chat box the whole day long
You wont know if I havent dusted or the curtain’s torn
You will drool over browsers, talk in HTML code
Why, you may even someday type me an ode
You never even noticed that my skin was pimply
That I am dark, plain and am quite skinny
I have met other men who are quite fussy
You dont know yet, I think it is you who I will marry
Its gonna be a great thing you just dont know that yet
Besides computer geeks earn a lot of money on the internet
Where do you get all these ideas from? You’re too good.
Wow! Ramit thanks!
LOL! Too good 🙂
Thank you Priya
In twitter istyle – This is pure #awesomeness 🙂
LOL Thanks!!!
In Barney style- This is Legend… wait for it… legendary
Wow! Love the appreciation
Cyber love! Brilliant! 🙂
Love in the Age of Yahoo and Twitter 😛
Sab kuch – up until the girl’s reply – was same to same as has often happened in my jeevan. But uske baad, it veers into an obvious fairy tale and total bloody humbug… mere saaath aisa kabhi nahin huan hain! ;/
Kyon is budhaape mein sapney dikha rahein ho??
Aw c’mon. Abhi toh I am in my youth, so you can not be budha! May be you’ll meet a smart canny goil soon
Too Good.. I ll just repeat that… !!
Thanks Hitchy
Lol Ritu, you come up with the funniest things!! :)))
Wow Shail, I love your poetry. It is totally emosanal attyachar! I totally admire it. Your compliment means a lot to me
I loved the ending 🙂
Originality Drooling..
Thank you Ankur
Love it!!!
Thanks IHM
Hey. My feed reader recommended I read your blog. Just getting started but I like your organsised template. (and the woman playing weave-finger game of which I don’t know the name)
Feed readers recommend my blog?! Oh wow! The woman is me and I am weaving a snare with strings …..
Brilliant read ma…. all the hrs on net showing themseleves. . . .
Thanks Madhur 😀
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Really awesome! Have read something like this before as in points why dating a geek is better. Never heard its poetic version. It sounds like rap 😀 Loved your template too. The comments section especially.
Thank you, thank you!! Would love to read the prose form too
I would have to look where it went. Long spiral web!
that was so ‘awwwww.’
trust you to find such great ideas.
Hum toe pehley fan they ji,
ab toe orient ke pakkhey ho gaye hain
full espeed pey.
Oi jee, PSPO bhi hai fan mein
this is absolutely awesome!!! 🙂 total awwwww 😀
btw love the new header way better than the old one 🙂
Thank you, should be a bit brighter though …….
Ha ha, funny!!
Thank you
simply lovely…. made me smile 🙂
I wrote this some time ago. Thought of reviving it
Amaaaaaaaaaaazingly well expressed and so apt to show that this is actually happening now-a-days:-)
Thank you. And yes it is. People meet face to face a long time after they get to know each other on chat
Haha.. that was so good.. and they lived happily ever after. 😛
It depends on how well the girl in the poem manages to nudge him to propose right? 😉
One word.. WOW!!!! 😛
Thank you Harsh
loved it
Ctrl Z should be an easier option here 🙂
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Awww this is so sweet and utterly brilliant. You hit the nail on the head on this one.
Kathy
http://gigglingtruckerswife.blogspot.com
Thanks Kathy
Brilliant!
Thank you
This was so refreshing and I loved it! Hahaha. I don’t care what anyone says – geeks can be sexy and hold great conversations! 🙂
Geeks are intelligent, of course they can! Glad you like this
too good …wiped away all the misconceptions ..
Thank you Elena